A Christmas Carol

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john conway

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Excellent read, well in the FM tradition of telling a good story.
 
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Malcolm Bason

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"As Steve opened the door, the Santa coat fell open??"

{{{Drool}}} Why'dya stop there? I was just getting excited!
 
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Paul Christie 3

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It's a bit far fetched - the little goblin didn't mention South Afri.....
 
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Wolfman Woody

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"that a little creature, like a goblin and known as Rontroversial Clay"

I've always thought of his as a Troll.

I agree with Paul above, you could have doen another 5000 words with the goblin, "Did you meet **** Walker just now? I used to know him y'know. Went fishing at his little cabin once .........."
 
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Baz

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Great story John.
Once again it goes to prove, we have pure geniouse on F.M.
 
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Les Clark

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Pure fiction ,no ruffe slapper`s,no S/A and no carpboy`s,naa,nobody would read that!


Cheer`s John, a good read, and more than a grain of truth.
 
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Ron Troversial Clay

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Well, what can I say.

A very good read John, I am honoured.

A very Merry Christmas to you all.

And to my son who gets on the plane to lovely SA this evening.
 
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The Monk

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excellent article John, first class, I presume my royalties are in the post mate?
 
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