‘I s’pose you know about Old Monastery Pool,’ one patron asked, as he exchanged a few precious stamps for one of Charlie’s trout.

Charlie shook his head. ‘Never heard of it, Sir.’

‘Plenty o’ big fish in Old Monastery Pool, lad,’ the patron continued. ‘Used to be the monks’ carp pond. They reared ‘em for food hundreds of years ago, it’s up in Glover’s Wood. Trees moved in once the monastery was gone but the pond’s still there.’

Charlie’s interest was piqued. ‘Really? Have you ever fished there?’

‘Me? Nah. You need Allsopp’s permission else it’s poaching and Allsopp hates me.’

Mr Allsopp was a local landowner Charlie knew. But, whilst Mr Allsopp apparently had grievance with this man, Charlie had never got on the wrong side of him. ‘How come you know it’s full of fish if you’ve never fished there, then?’

‘Must be,’ answered the patron, after a long swig of ale, ‘else why’d Allsopp have refused all the folk who’ve asked to fish it he don’t hate. He’s keepin’ all the carp for himself!’

 

The next Sunday morning there was only one thing on Young Charlie’s mind. Church was the only place he ever saw Mr Allsopp, so that was where he’d get his permission. Old Monastery Pool was full of ancient, monster carp and, understandably, Charlie was desperate to catch one.

‘Mr Allsopp,’ Charlie asked, after the service, ‘is it true that there’s an old carp pond up in your woods?’

‘True enough, young man,’ Mr Allsopp answered, as they walked up the narrow church path. ‘It belonged to the old monastery before it was burned down. Why do you ask?’

‘I was wondering if I might have your permission to fish it, Sir. I’d return any fish I caught of course, unless you wanted me to bring them down to the manor.’

‘I don’t think so, young man,’ Mr Allsopp answered dismissively. ‘Now I’d best be off, lots to do.’

Young Charlie was devastated. Fishing was his life, but he’d never had the chance to land anything truly remarkable before. A monster carp would be his crowning achievement and have the pub talking for years.

The next Sunday he beseeched Mr Allsopp again, but got the same answer. So he tried again the following Sunday and was still refused. The Sunday after that he offered to do odd jobs at the manor to pay for his fishing. The Sunday after that he offered all the trout and eels he caught for a month. But still, Mr Allsopp would not relent.

Charlie tried and tried, Sunday after Sunday, never giving up.

Eventually, he started calling in on Mr Allsopp at the manor itself. 

‘Lord, not you again,’ Mr Allsopp moaned, when Charlie visited the manor for the third time in as many days.

‘I’m just desperate to fish your carp pond,’ Charlie said, before Mr Allsopp had the chance to usher him away. ‘Please, just say yes and I’ll stop coming here. I’ll never ask anything of you again, I promise.’

‘The answer is no. I’ve told—‘

‘Why won’t you let me?’ Charlie interrupted. ‘Why are you being such a grouch?’

‘Because of the abbot,’ Mr Allsopp barked back, exasperated. ‘When he refused starving villagers carp after a failed harvest, they killed him and burned down the monastery. He still – don’t you know?’

‘I don’t care about some dead old abbot,’ Charlie answered, ‘I just want one chance to fish the pond. Please, Mr Allsopp, please.’

‘Fine,’ Mr Allsopp answered, throwing his hands in the air, ‘but don’t come crying to me when …’ But Charlie didn’t hear the end of what Mr Allsopp had to say because he was already running back towards his house.

As soon as he had his tackle, Young Charlie raced across the local fields towards Glover’s Wood. What he found in the dying light disappointed him. The pond was easy enough to find but it was half silted up, clogged with pond weed and full of dead branches. Only a few patches of clear water remained and Charlie thought he could see through them right to the bottom. It seemed that the water was only a few inches deep, hardly the sort of place that might harbour a monster.

But he had come this far. Charlie chucked out a little stick float and worm, hoping that there might still be a few minnows around, maybe even an eel or two. Almost as soon as his float stood straight in the water it was swept under with all the ferocity of a colossal pike strike. Charlie’s line snapped instantly but he didn’t care, there was obviously something huge lurking in the pond! Maybe there was deeper water below the weed after all, the perfect hiding place for the giant carp he’d hoped would be there all along.

Charlie wound in his loose line, sank back against a tree, reached into his basket and began switching to his most robust tackle. But, in his eagerness, he couldn’t resist a glance up at the pond.

Standing on the other side of the bank amongst the trees, staring at him intently through the gloom, the murky shape of an old man dressed in tattered robes. ‘My … pool …’ he groaned, in a voice thick with suffering.

Terrified, Young Charlie shot up from where he was sitting and slammed his head straight into a low branch, knocking himself out.

 

Night engulfed Young Charlie when he came round. He remembered where he was, what had happened and, heart hammering, sat straight to squint through the darkness. To his horror, his tackle was all smashed to pieces.

He stood and ran without retrieving so much as a broken float.

 

 

*This story is based on local hearsay! Most of my local ponds are inhabited by mirror carp and, apparently, they’re all descended from the carp a group of monks used to rear in their monastery pond hundreds of years ago. According to local legend, the monastery was burned down when a cruel abbot refused fish to hungry villagers after a failed harvest. In doing so he bought death and a terrible curse upon himself. Now he’s doomed to patrol Old Monastery Pool day and night, making sure no villagers try to take his precious fish. It’s said Young Charlie found himself on the wrong side of the abbot’s wrathful apparition!

 

The pictures included are of the Burnell Arms back in its heyday, me with a local monastery-descended mirror and a picture of Old Monastery Pool as it is now. I’ve been there, yes, but I’ve yet to pluck up the courage to throw in a line!

 

 

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